
So, you’ve hit a wall in your story. You’ve got a great premise, a killer ending, but for some reason you just can’t get from point A to point B. Story Logic Labs is a narrative consultancy for WIPs. I stress test your story to help you identify what’s keeping you from making more progress. If you want effective and creative solutions to get unstuck, let me take a look and help you enhance your work.
I provide writers with narrative consultancy and QA testing for their stories. My mission is to bridge the gap between the chaos of raw imagination and the functionality of an immersive story. I stress test the structural integrity of your story and identify the logic leaks and lore contradictions. I don't just find the glitches; I provide the patches—creative solutions and visual schematics—needed to ensure your unique world reaches its fullest potential.
Story Logic Labs is not an editing or proofreading service.
I’m Oz, the Narrative Consultant at Story Logic Labs.
I approach storytelling with a systems-first mindset, analyzing your manuscript the way a developer debugs code: hunting for the glitches, logic leaks, and broken physics that disrupt the flow of the narrative.
I built Story Logic Labs for writers who have the imagination but need help getting the ball rolling again. You bring the creativity; I’ll provide the structural support to get you back on track.
Price: $99
Perfect for WIPs and stuck drafts.
The Process:
Input: You provide a detailed outline and 3 chapters of your choice (up to 10k words).
Stress Test: A targeted diagnostic of your story’s structural health. I analyze the text for logic leaks, lore contradictions, and pacing stalls.
Output: You receive a comprehensive Diagnostic Report and a custom Narrative Schematic (Visual Story Map).
The Goal: To give your story a stable foundation so you can keep building without the fear of a total narrative collapse later
See how I diagnosed structural flaws in "Lost in Limbo".
Story Logic Labs guarantees that your manuscript will never be input into public AI models (LLMs) for analysis or training purposes.
All structural scans, schematic mapping, and feedback are performed 100% manually by the Narrative Consultant.
Turnaround time is 7 business days from project start date.
Story Logic Labs provides narrative consulting and structural advice. All creative decisions remain the sole responsibility of the author. Authors retain full ownership of their intellectual property. I do not guarantee publication, sales, or agent representation.
Content Policy: Story Logic Labs reserves the right to decline or terminate any project containing offensive content (hate speech, discriminatory content, etc).
Payment & Refunds: Payment is due upon project acceptance via a secure invoice. If the client becomes unresponsive for more than 14 days after the start date, the project will be terminated and the non-refundable deposit will be forfeited to cover reserved scheduling time. If Story Logic Labs cancels the project due to unforeseen circumstances, a full refund will be issued.